You Promised

She hears the 
Ole' green pick up truck
Pull into the 
Parking lot.

She peeks her head
Out from under 
The covers and 
Sees him stumble
Into the apartment 
Door.

She runs
Downstairs to say
Goodnight.

Questions why he was 
Gone 3 hours and didn't
Even return with 
The milk or bread
From the store.

She smells his 
Breath
Fresh of liquor and 
Smoke.  

She notices that 
He's swaying
Side to side.

Whats wrong 
Daddy?
Why can't You 
Walk?

I though You quit drinking 
Daddy,
You said you
Were through.

You promised me
No more beer
You said You loved
Me o' so dear.

"I hate You daddy"
Written in black crayon
On her bedroom 
Wall.

But that is forever
Erased now,
Thats forever gone.

Written By: Molly Dolloff
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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