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You Perfect Tree

Crooked branches Falling leaves Firmly in soil You perfect tree Nests of birds Housing eggs Home to some You perfect tree Sweet ripe fruit Dangle from your hair Food for few You perfect tree Helping all You perfect tree

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2023 6:07:00 AM

Trees are precious, and i hate seeing them go, they are selfless givers just like some people we know. I love the way this flows in such a soul warming manner. So beautiful and seamless. Especially “sweet ripe fruit dangle from your hair” what a stunning ode! Brilliant write

Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/19/2023 7:08:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments :-) I am glad you enjoyed it

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/19/2023 5:57:00 AM

Oh, such an impeccable write as expressing the emotions for the perfect tree, who may wither and turn weary through the trials of time but never forgets to serve the nature.. Loved reading this!

Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/19/2023 7:09:00 AM

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it :-)