You Orbit My Space
Determined feet walks life,
trample the soul to reach the goal,
broken heart can’t trace the trail.
When you orbit my inner space,
luminous love turns you into a star,
suffusing me with its sparkle.
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September 23, 2017.
For Bite Size Poem No. 40 Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
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