You Never Stay Long

The sun just rose and
The blossoms came and played in
The bare tree branches

Now after a while
All amber flowers are gone
You never stay long

The rapture remains
You'll return to embellish
My blues in boredom

November 10, 2017
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Murray Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 5:03 PM
We are never bored when we have your poems to read Probir.
Gupta Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Thank you so much, Jean ...
Manassian Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 3:37 PM
Hope the embellishment of flowers brings you joy when spring is come. Lovely piece. Blessings.
Gupta Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:37 AM
Thank you, Eileen ...
Ashley Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 2:06 PM
Probir, your impressive way with words in creating beautiful lines of thoughts and imagery never ceases to amaze me. Your lovely haiku, for me, resonates with hopeful longing of wondrous renewal.. Excellent and enjoyed!
Gupta Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Your precious appreciation is indeed inspiring, Susan ... Thank you ...
Babbit Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 1:22 PM
Building on the anticipation of its returm. Nicely written.
Gupta Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so much for your kind visit and comments ...
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Enjoyed reading this poem--beautiful imagery--well written, Probir!
Gupta Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
One Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 6:32 AM
Beautiful imagery and lovely lines..
Gupta Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Silent ...
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 9:44 PM
Wonderful imagery , Probir. Don't be bored. The seasons come and go, but bring a new painted canvas to replace the old. :) Hugs dear friend
Gupta Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ... This is not just personal ...
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