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You Never Stay Long

The sun just rose and The blossoms came and played in The bare tree branches Now after a while All amber flowers are gone You never stay long The rapture remains You'll return to embellish My blues in boredom November 10, 2017

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Date: 11/12/2017 5:03:00 PM
We are never bored when we have your poems to read Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/13/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jean ...
Date: 11/12/2017 3:37:00 PM
Hope the embellishment of flowers brings you joy when spring is come. Lovely piece. Blessings.
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Date: 11/13/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen ...
Date: 11/10/2017 2:06:00 PM
Probir, your impressive way with words in creating beautiful lines of thoughts and imagery never ceases to amaze me. Your lovely haiku, for me, resonates with hopeful longing of wondrous renewal.. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 11/13/2017 8:52:00 AM
Your precious appreciation is indeed inspiring, Susan ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/10/2017 1:22:00 PM
Building on the anticipation of its returm. Nicely written.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/13/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind visit and comments ...
Date: 11/10/2017 7:07:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this poem--beautiful imagery--well written, Probir!
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Date: 11/13/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Date: 11/10/2017 6:32:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and lovely lines..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/13/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Silent ...
Date: 11/9/2017 9:44:00 PM
Wonderful imagery , Probir. Don't be bored. The seasons come and go, but bring a new painted canvas to replace the old. :) Hugs dear friend
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/13/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ... This is not just personal ...

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