You Melt Me



I suffer happily 
under your magnetic spell 
dreams of you do save me 

from this earthly hell 
you mesmerizing soul man
who owns all of this woman 

June 25, 2019
1:45am PST

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 8:33 PM
I read the other comments not wanting to copy them but I never thought of Jesus, I thought of a romantic, captivating, gorgeous hunk of man when I read it.
Romios Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 10:06 PM
Everyone reads it through thir own lens. Panagiota
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Hello Panagiota,this poem is lovely. I hope that the soul man is happy with this woman. have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 1:27 PM
Hello Panagiot, you are so welcomed. Glad to hear that soul man is happy. ...yes i will create a soul man for myself. good idea. have a nice day my friend.
Romios Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 12:10 PM
Greetings to you Darlene. The very first poet who welcomed me to the soup, 430 poems ago. thank you for that! Soul man is well and happy, yes.)) Create magic for yourself today, Panagiota
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 10:47 AM
Great expression of love, Panagiota. My sister is a few hours out, and then I'll be taking off to WA, so it's good I could at least see one of your little poems this morning. See you later!
Romios Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 11:19 AM
My love and prayers go with you Andrea! I don't go crazy posting 10 a day as I once did. Nor trying to be the BEST on any lists. Am too old and slow-)) and yes, am satisfied with a few friends here. All are great humans with soul. Wanted you to know all is well. God be with you, dearest Andrea! Panagiota
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Very romantic piece, Panagiota.
Romios Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Yes. Short, but the romance is there, I agree Panagiota
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