You Man

You Man

-a request by Mam Aiyah

You as a man can fill up this world
With the love of your heart,
Let them flow into your veins
As the oxygen of your spirit
Goes into the lungs of your kindness

You as a man can share the thoughts of your brain,
Even though your memory is not that enough to complete the story
Let your axon abound and connect to the spinal cord of your dreams

You as a man can smile with your lips
Let there be a good quotes for every word
Of your mouth as they slip,
Swallow all the sorrows, 
Cut the sadness of your teeth, make them fly away

You as a man can show your eyes with happiness,
Mix this with inspirations
As they blink in with visionaries

You as a man can smell the fragrance of nice posture
Strain the bad from good using your cilia,
As your thumb and index made it concrete
And threw them at a distance

You as a man can hear solutions,
Can fight all the negative pictures
With your muscles in your skeleton,
You can build a problem killer device
Energy is your emotions,

You as a man can face all of your knotty points
You can hold the sky,
As your feet stay on the ground…
Because you as a MAN,
Is H U M A N…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Torres Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Hey jhucel!!! ..Congratz!!! your poem is now one of the TOP 100 hottest poem here in PS!!! ..wohooooo!!!! I'm so hapeeeeee for U!!! OXOX
Del Rosario Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 4:37 AM
THANK YOU VERY MUCH>>>>>>>>> AIYAH AND SIR JAKE
Ponce Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:55 PM
Scathing hot hahaha
Ponce Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 6:40 AM
I envy the way you write, Jhucel. Your character shines forth from each of your poems. I'm quite sure, because of your poetic gestures, that you're a fine FINE gentleman. The world needs a point of view like yours.
Torres Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 10:56 AM
ako si Aiyah ang mabahong_poet?!.. hehe... Yeah mga Ser.. let's create a group!!!!!!!!!
Del Rosario Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 4:39 AM
yeah. lets make a group...... then .. hoping someday this poems will be in BOOKS>>> heheheh
Del Rosario Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 4:38 AM
add me , jhucel29
Ponce Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Ngayon ko lang narealize --- maka-sir to! Grabe kayo sakin! Anyway! heyyy got FB??? Let's connect and make a group!
Ponce Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Poetry may be the secret true language of life! HAHAHA :)
Torres Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Apir?~.. 1/2,1/4... cool of you both!!! Keep penning!!!
Ponce Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:54 PM
For what is poetry if we won't write about what's going on in our life? The way I see it, Most poems are all about relationships be it friends, family or a lover. Apir!
Torres Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 7:49 AM
two thums up for that!!! . .:O)) poetry as diary.. hehe... i'm guilty!!.. :O))
Del Rosario Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 10:03 PM
THANKS Sir Jake..NICE.. kainspire-inspire naman po.. I usually wrote about true stories.. hehehe.. Yung araw-na araw na nangyayare sa buhay... For me POETRY is my way to show the true meaning of life
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April 30, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Hello Jhucel, I'm speechless. This is undeniably beautiful. WOW... Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful write with all of us here. Peace, Deborah
Del Rosario Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Thank you deborah... : )
Torres Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 2:50 PM
AWESOME!!! FABULOUS!!! SUPERB!!! ..(sorry if I missed it on the date you posted it, jhucel... I was kinda busy those days... ) You made it!!! hindi ako nagkamali.. I knew that you're the right person who can write a very well written poem about this theme!!! I feel so proud and blushed!! ( OMG! special mention of my nae w/ " and " Mam Aiyah..haha) I'm gonna fave this!!! this is too much.. I'm too much..haha... Thank you for giving a life to my dream poem... Thanks a lot!!! :O)) oxox~~mwah!!! ^_^
Torres Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 8:50 AM
my gratitude as always!!! ..Keep your pen high!!!
Del Rosario Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 10:40 PM
aside from school, its also my first time to have a request to write a poem, kaya ayan .. Your Wish is my command... : )
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April 27, 2014 at 9:12 PM
This is beautiful man
Del Rosario Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Thank you SIR: )
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