You Make Me Feel Like a Sunset

You make me feel like a 
Summer's sunset on a beach:
Watching the bight rays stretch
Out across the waves,
Saying one last golden goodbye to the world 
Before it goes to sleep; allowing 
The stars and moon to take its place in the 
Evening sky, as they sparkle across
The water like thousands of dancing snowflakes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 22, 2012 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ernest. Love, Carol
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February 20, 2012 at 11:04 AM
This is a beautiful romantic poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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February 20, 2012 at 5:12 AM
Sweet and lovely poem Ernest....well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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January 23, 2012 at 12:24 AM
Very pretty image of sunsets and starry skies- beautiful, thank you for sharing, bren
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