You Make Me Feel

You make me feel like the first sipped of coffee at a café,
The concluding mouthwatering bite at a buffet,
The smartest predator and the scrumptious prey,

You make me feel like the world would end, if I lose you in some way,
The wise psychic that forever knows the right thing to say,
A kid feeling the joyous fun to play,

You make me feel extra special when you spray,
Your love on me as if it was a can that say,
“The way she makes you feel can’t be felt by anyone anyway.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 21, 2011 at 4:19 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Darian. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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March 19, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Lovdely write well penned on You make me feel, Darian
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