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You Make Me So! So! So!

I sit still and thoughts of you make me so! so!so! wet Laughter smiles inside my once burden mystic mind And yet today is with joy, I can think so! so! so! Unwrap these shadows of faded vision I seek My reality creeps aimlessly I am happy to say so! so!so! Chuckled to myself reminiscing my inner glows turns on and on and I shout so! so!so! Only the deep see my comprehensions of Love, laughter, happiness, passion and yes fear too I live my life with no regrets and I say so! so! so! ©Pamela creary PAC 2008

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 10:28:00 PM

AWESOME

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/4/2008 9:41:00 AM

Lovede the usage of the so, so in the poem. The message is strong, filled with desire and longing. Loving your style.

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/3/2008 7:22:00 PM

everys right this poem is good with a great flow. thank you for sharing with us.

Michael Romero

Date: 12/1/2008 2:29:00 PM

oh, so! so! so! good I realy liked this write looking forward to reading more of your work, keep on writing on.

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 11/29/2008 6:47:00 PM

This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. I can see warm images in this one. Welcome to Poetry Soup and great job! ~Joseph