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You Loved

You loved
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You loved me so much,
that you bruised my face
You loved me so much
I'm a slave in this place.

You love me so much,
I shiver in fear
You love me so much
I shake when you're near.

You loved me so much,
you lie and you cheat
You loved me so much
that my body gets beat.

You loved me so much,
my spirits you break
You loved me so much
that your love must be fake.

You loved me so much,
you put me down
You loved me so much
till I'm mute from sound.

You loved me so much,
you stole my last breath
You loved me so much
that you loved me to death.

8/18/14- Jessica Thompson ( Not about me, but there are women who go
through this, and it's sad)

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Jay Sky Date: 9/9/2014 1:16:00 AM It is sad. Sorry for whoever went through it. Reminds nee allot about a song called love the way you lie. But in a worse way. Great job Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 9/17/2014 11:42:00 PM Glad you liked this piece, even though it is sad. I didn't write it about anyone honestly, just always hear bout this going on. Tc and ty for your kind reply. Jess :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/2/2014 9:51:00 AM Hi Jessica, thank you for the sweet reply...Linda Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/28/2014 3:16:00 PM WOW, this is tough, it reminds of a poem I wrote, back in the day. About abused women, who end up in a box. Well done Jessica... Linda Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 8/29/2014 10:50:00 AM Thank you Linda, I am glad you enjoyed the piece. I will have to look at more of your poems and find the one who wrote as well on this sad subject. Take care my friend, Jess :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2014 1:03:00 PM - Yes, there are many who are "loved by yellow and blue marks .... concussion and bleeding wound" - A marriage in prison and always in fear - a "taboo" subject - very well written, dear friend Jessica !- oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 8/29/2014 10:48:00 AM Thank you Anne Lise , I suppose this is a very touchy subject for some. People hear about it all the time though. I am glad you liked this write. Take care my friend, Jess :)

Paul Callus Date: 8/23/2014 7:01:00 PM a 7 rating for this write, Jessica. both physical and mental abuse are to be condemned. excellent take on this topic. // paul Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 8/25/2014 7:50:00 PM Thank you Paul, I am glad you liked this piece. Take care friend, Jess :)

J. R. Corbin Date: 8/22/2014 1:19:00 PM Hi Jessica, I liked the way you handled this. I think abusive relationships are the worst thing in the world, or just about. I cannot fathom how people can treat each other so badly, even to the point of death. You are right, just so sad. I did a little something on the subject. See lyrics, 'I Forgot To Forget You', if you have a minute. luv ya, Jim Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 8/22/2014 1:49:00 PM Thank you Jim, appreciate the kind comments on my work. Yes, people can be cruel to one another at times. I will try and stop by to read your work soon. Take care, Jess

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/22/2014 11:02:00 AM Oh...this is heart rending and true for so many women. Twist and warped love...and the end result, if not physical deal is emotional death. Great write. Login to Reply Jessica Thompson Date: 8/22/2014 11:41:00 AM Thank you Elleen, Yes you hear about it happening all the time. It is a sad . Glad you liked this piece. Take care friend, Jess :)