You Loss Me

You took my feelings and casted them aside. 
As you played your games with my mind. 
Broke my heart and tore it apart. 
I believed your words that flowed from your heart.
What for? I am asking myself now?
Just to be made the fool in everyone’s eyes. 
Well I am here to tell you to move on.
You have already out stayed your welcome. 
Never will I cry another tear drop for you.
Never will your name touch my lips again. 
You hurt me once and that’s all you get 
I will not fall back into your web of lies and guilt. 
You loss this friendship along with me. 
I hope your games were worth it in the end.

friendshiplossgamesfree verse

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Dan Kearley

Date: 8/22/2012 4:27:00 PM

I think I may know? Hmmmm?

David Williams

Date: 8/19/2012 7:53:00 AM

soup mail...

David Williams

Date: 8/18/2012 11:05:00 AM

soup mail....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2012 10:53:00 AM

penetrating piece that will surely drive this person away.. you have the courage to stand strong and we are here for you, cory!... :) huggs!

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 8/18/2012 10:36:00 AM

Cory, Love the message here. Taking back your power is the best revenge! Cynthia

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2012 3:49:00 PM

SOUP MAIL > Cory :) // Anne-Lise :)

Cory Long
Date: 8/19/2012 6:44:00 AM

(((((HUGS )))))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2012 5:04:00 PM

Bravo, well done !!!!! <3

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/17/2012 1:04:00 PM

Unbelievable that this allowed again. This loser is back, wow. Hey Soup how much crap does this piece of garbage have to pull before he is yanked for good. Stand strong Cory you have many "real" friends on here. Luv Michael

Cory Long

Date: 8/17/2012 11:31:00 AM

Thank you to everyone for their kind words of encouragement and suggestions to get rid of him for good... cory

David Williams

Date: 8/17/2012 11:14:00 AM

Cory great write, as Arild says we know who it is, remember rules and regulations are on your side not his..we all make mistakes it does not mean we should be persecuted for them!..you have lots of friends here, stand tall...David soup mail..

Cory Long
Date: 8/17/2012 11:27:00 AM

Thanks for having my back through this mess..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2012 10:39:00 AM

A evil wolf in sheep`s clothing. - he is (sorry)a asshole - Take care my friend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Tracy Edwards

Date: 8/17/2012 9:16:00 AM

Im sorry this man preyed on you when you were vulnerable Cory, when all you needed was a friend. Love your friend xxx

Cory Long
Date: 8/17/2012 9:51:00 AM

he'll get his in the end.. Just wait your game is soon to end.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 5:04:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Cory. I hope to be able to read more of it soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

The Situation

Date: 8/16/2012 2:36:00 PM

been there done that. some how we all must pay the price of this lesson.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2012 11:38:00 AM

This also works for a woman too! She had hurt me so bad that I finally found the true love of my life, my wife! Sometimes going through this strengthens your heart and allows you to see what is out there and to eventually find that special one! What a fantastic write Cory! I really enjoyed this free verse! Great Work!!

Cory Long
Date: 8/16/2012 11:41:00 AM

thanks russell :)

Fred Bell

Date: 8/16/2012 9:55:00 AM

thats a real good poem and i know how it feels to be hurt.

Debra Squyres

Date: 8/16/2012 9:36:00 AM

This is sad...but perhaps a lesson learned? I don't have any idea of whom you speak, Cory. But let it go....don't give it a second thought. Good writing !