You Loss Me

You took my feelings and casted them aside. As you played your games with my mind. Broke my heart and tore it apart. I believed your words that flowed from your heart. What for? I am asking myself now? Just to be made the fool in everyone’s eyes. Well I am here to tell you to move on. You have already out stayed your welcome. Never will I cry another tear drop for you. Never will your name touch my lips again. You hurt me once and that’s all you get I will not fall back into your web of lies and guilt. You loss this friendship along with me. I hope your games were worth it in the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kearley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 4:27 PM
I think I may know? Hmmmm?
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 7:53 AM
soup mail...
Williams Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 11:05 AM
soup mail....
Onclaud Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 10:53 AM
penetrating piece that will surely drive this person away.. you have the courage to stand strong and we are here for you, cory!... :) huggs!
Alvez Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Cory, Love the message here. Taking back your power is the best revenge! Cynthia
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 3:49 PM
SOUP MAIL > Cory :) // Anne-Lise :)
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August 19, 2012 at 6:44 AM
(((((HUGS )))))
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Bravo, well done !!!!! <3
Falotico Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Unbelievable that this allowed again. This loser is back, wow. Hey Soup how much crap does this piece of garbage have to pull before he is yanked for good. Stand strong Cory you have many "real" friends on here. Luv Michael
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August 17, 2012 at 11:31 AM
Thank you to everyone for their kind words of encouragement and suggestions to get rid of him for good... cory
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Cory great write, as Arild says we know who it is, remember rules and regulations are on your side not his..we all make mistakes it does not mean we should be persecuted for them!..you have lots of friends here, stand tall...David soup mail..
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August 17, 2012 at 11:27 AM
Thanks for having my back through this mess..
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 10:39 AM
A evil wolf in sheep`s clothing. - he is (sorry)a asshole - Take care my friend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Edwards Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Im sorry this man preyed on you when you were vulnerable Cory, when all you needed was a friend. Love your friend xxx
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August 17, 2012 at 9:51 AM
he'll get his in the end.. Just wait your game is soon to end.
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 5:04 AM
I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Cory. I hope to be able to read more of it soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Situation Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 2:36 PM
been there done that. some how we all must pay the price of this lesson.
Sivey Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 11:38 AM
This also works for a woman too! She had hurt me so bad that I finally found the true love of my life, my wife! Sometimes going through this strengthens your heart and allows you to see what is out there and to eventually find that special one! What a fantastic write Cory! I really enjoyed this free verse! Great Work!!
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August 16, 2012 at 11:41 AM
thanks russell :)
Bell Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 9:55 AM
thats a real good poem and i know how it feels to be hurt.
Squyres Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 9:36 AM
This is sad...but perhaps a lesson learned? I don't have any idea of whom you speak, Cory. But let it go....don't give it a second thought. Good writing !
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Oh sad this one and sorry you have been hurt, do you mean met as in person or on electronically ?xx
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August 16, 2012 at 9:29 AM
most people know him through online...
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August 16, 2012 at 9:18 AM
Many people have met this person I write about and now I have seen who he really is? So take a tip from a friend stay away from this man...
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