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YOU LOOK LIKE YOU DO

Life can so often be unexpectedly amusing
Perhaps not so if you are into self abusing

Today its five am with headlight I'm on my usual daily run
I encounter a well dressed tall man a white shirt adorns his back 
  he rides a pushbike which is parked in a bicycle rack

I notice what I assume to be  a cigarette is held within his hand
He gestures toward me It takes a moment before i understand 

Would you like a puiff at first I thought him drunk
I realise its dope. No thank you I'm not into inhaling junk

Have you never ever tried he says . No  
Me with long white hair and beard barefoot he says you look like you do
Too many words and syllables  now to form a monoku

I also tell him I don't drink alcohol coffee only eat food raw
Whats your age he says Seventy eight 
You're looking good quite impressed with what he saw

Now this is not the first time that I have encountered
due to my appearance this  assumption you look like you do
Tapped on the shoulder from behind many years ago
 Where do we get some  hooch in this town we're new
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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April 26, 2026 at 5:19 AM
Hehe….l like this poem Douglas! We make assumptions often in life and are so often very wrong. How good are you if l may say….no coffee etc and only raw food! I admire that. Enjoyed this real life write….Debx
bard Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 4:50 PM
Good day Deb There's a few I have made I must say Blessings Douglas
Allison Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 2:49 AM
It's a shame that folk are so quick to jump to conclusions and you have proved it in your wonderful words:-) hugs Jan xx
bard Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 4:50 PM
Good day Jan Thank you once again for support Blessings Douglas
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