You Let Go a Big Blast

Has this ever happened to you While bending down to tie up your shoe You let go a big fella Destroying the credenza Bump your head and you don't know who's who
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 11:31 AM
I admit to those things you charge...sounded like a great big barge...smelly stuff...the head part rough...the cost of all of it was quite large
Ellison Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 3:39 PM
The cost... a new credenza!!! LOL Cheers, Jake
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November 18, 2016 at 7:58 AM
I read the list of who's who//you, a gnu and a dog named Boo//made the list//I was pist//I didn't make the list, boo hoo! BLAST AWAY JACKSON!!! btw - I'm amazed you gave your temp forecast in fahrenheit — I dood not know you are bilingualish. A mighty 31 deg here this AM. BRRRRR and WAAAAHHHH!!!
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November 18, 2016 at 8:20 AM
GOOD CHILLY MORNING JOHN JOHN!!! Yup... I'm old school! Don't know why Canada had to change!!! You got it, I am bilingualish!!! LOL CHEERS, Jackson... spring is just around the corner!!!
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