You Left Me Here With Pain

Walking through the Park, just with Lonliness in my Heart

Kids are Screaming, People are smiling

But in Me something is Dying

An old Man is walking on by, he say's girl don't cry

Just Starring arround, can't feel the ground

 

Back in my Flat, feeling so bad

The Phone is ringing but its too far

Cause in my Head there is just War

You left me here with all the Pain

What a Pity, What a Shame

 

Going out into the night, trying to hold my Head up high

Rain is falling down on my Hair

Cloose my Eyes, just breathing the Air

Wind is blowing through my Brain

You left me here with all the Pain

 

Wanna hear the whole Story?

No Happy End, No Morning Glory

An old Man told me just one Day

You will be left with all the Pain

What a Pity, What a Shame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/23/2011 11:51:00 AM
There's a tremendous loneliness in this poem. Thank you for sharing Susann....:)
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:54:00 AM
Remember though.. what does not kills you makes your stronger. I have also felt as your words have stated. Steve
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