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You Left Me

You Left me in our house
Covered in blood and dust
The only friend I have now is a mouse
You couldnt have know I was still there

Just lying there under the stairs
I thought about the blast that sent me there
Covered in blood and dust
now as you allways said un to dust

I say now i must go 
to sway to and fro
Into the friendly hands of death
Goodbye old friend Sarah Beth

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Poet Destroyer A

February 8, 2015 at 4:06 PM

Hi Ben, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

February 8, 2015 at 3:12 PM

Ben, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT