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The nights are longer now.
Darkness is talking at the corners,
Silence is no longer here
And nor do you.
Loneliness is screaming of isolation,
Forgiveness is playing with the wind.
My heart is like a hunted house
Cobwebs hanging, touching the ground,
Dreams fled away,
That room is empty now,
You left and didn’t care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Agustin Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 4:59 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Ro Sfetcu, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Ro Sfetcu, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Timperley Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 3:26 PM
Powerful words, very dramatic. This is old work now from 2007. Are you still writng? I hope so. God bless. Dave.
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February 1, 2012 at 8:16 AM
OOh that's a really powerful poem, great work xD
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