Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

You Lead Love

As the moon smiles 
beams pearly white 
silver shadows dancing 
in the souls warm sweeping energy 
Sweetly brushing butterfly wings 
floating inside flying to the sound 
Echoes floating in each flutter 
touching a warm dainty voice sings 
magic chanting 
I am to the mantra off your life 
graced each step 
one like a swan in flight 
always flying forward 
Never stepping back
finding everything in peace 
inside out shines beautiful 
dancing the night away

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Dorian Petersen Potter November 5, 2014 at 1:24 PM You've painted a beautiful canvas here with loving words. Very romantic and soft, my dear friend. Hugs! :) xxxx D. Liam Mcdaid November 5, 2014 at 1:30 PM dazzling beautiful comment dorian thank you deeply smiling bless you

Nette Onclaud November 5, 2014 at 4:44 AM a splendor of a write, liam... you are romance reborn.. huggs Liam Mcdaid November 5, 2014 at 1:32 PM smiling nette i wrote this softy thinking on someone really special to me wonderful comment dear friend brightened up my day thank you so kindly

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 4, 2014 at 11:30 PM A beautiful image you created, Liam! So soft and sweet...love and blessings, Rhonda Liam Mcdaid November 5, 2014 at 3:51 AM rhonda wonderful comment thank you kindly heartfelt beautiful bless you

Tim Smith November 4, 2014 at 5:22 PM Always flying forward...love that line...outstanding my friend Liam Mcdaid November 4, 2014 at 5:39 PM ah your so sweet tim thank you deeply wonderful comment dear friend

Jan Allison November 4, 2014 at 2:21 PM wonderful imagery Liam - I feel all warm and floaty reading this:-) Hugs Jan xx Liam Mcdaid November 4, 2014 at 5:34 PM smiling i floated into another world jan shouting i am an alien please do not hurt me when writing this wonderful comment my mad mind took a turn dear pal bless you

Charmaine Chircop November 4, 2014 at 2:02 PM So vivid like a painting this is and somehow gave me that serene magical feel.Favouriting it! Liam Mcdaid November 4, 2014 at 5:28 PM thank you charmaine truly dazzling beautiful comment dear friend bless you heartfelt appreciated

Pace Ink-U-Script November 4, 2014 at 1:45 PM Love the imagery that this gives to the reader. Its as if you painted a script from a movie scene...I really enjoyed! Liam Mcdaid November 4, 2014 at 3:33 PM thank you kindly for the wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated dear pal