You Lead Love

As the moon smiles 
beams pearly white 
silver shadows dancing 
in the souls warm sweeping energy 
Sweetly brushing butterfly wings 
floating inside flying to the sound 
Echoes floating in each flutter 
touching a warm dainty voice sings 
magic chanting 
I am to the mantra off your life 
graced each step 
one like a swan in flight 
always flying forward 
Never stepping back
finding everything in peace 
inside out shines beautiful 
dancing the night away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/5/2014 1:24:00 PM
You've painted a beautiful canvas here with loving words. Very romantic and soft, my dear friend. Hugs! :) xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 1:30:00 PM
dazzling beautiful comment dorian thank you deeply smiling bless you
Date: 11/5/2014 4:44:00 AM
a splendor of a write, liam... you are romance reborn.. huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 1:32:00 PM
smiling nette i wrote this softy thinking on someone really special to me wonderful comment dear friend brightened up my day thank you so kindly
Date: 11/4/2014 11:30:00 PM
A beautiful image you created, Liam! So soft and sweet...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 3:51:00 AM
rhonda wonderful comment thank you kindly heartfelt beautiful bless you
Date: 11/4/2014 5:22:00 PM
Always flying forward...love that line...outstanding my friend
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 5:39:00 PM
ah your so sweet tim thank you deeply wonderful comment dear friend
Date: 11/4/2014 2:21:00 PM
wonderful imagery Liam - I feel all warm and floaty reading this:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 5:34:00 PM
smiling i floated into another world jan shouting i am an alien please do not hurt me when writing this wonderful comment my mad mind took a turn dear pal bless you
Date: 11/4/2014 2:02:00 PM
So vivid like a painting this is and somehow gave me that serene magical feel.Favouriting it!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 5:28:00 PM
thank you charmaine truly dazzling beautiful comment dear friend bless you heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/4/2014 1:45:00 PM
Love the imagery that this gives to the reader. Its as if you painted a script from a movie scene...I really enjoyed!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 3:33:00 PM
thank you kindly for the wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated dear pal
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