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You know what they say

They say no one is perfect, but you were. In the beginning, it was you and I. Now I see, that it’s us, you, them and everything else in between. Two islands across the sea have a stronger connection than you and me. I’m everything you never wanted or thought to be. I’m not thin or pretty. I’m not subservient or submissive. I’m not the right shade or person. I’m loud. I’m a bit heavy. I’m bossy. I’m demanding of a love, I once saw a glimpse of, in a man whose shadow I’d only seen. You’re a good person. You just can’t value me. You just can’t love me the right way. You just can’t because although you were perfect for me, I’m not even a dot to you and even if I was, I wouldn’t even sparkle. I guess it’s true what they say… No one is perfect. But you were.

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Date: 8/16/2024 9:35:00 PM
I agree with Karen. You have an interesting poem here. But can one truly be perfect? Maybe in moments. But imagine if someone asked you to be perfect for the entire time you've known them. That's pretty tough, unless we all have different views on what perfect really means.
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Date: 8/12/2024 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. I enjoyed reading it, and invite you to read "You're Not Perfect", my poem along a similar theme. Looking forward to reading more of your great poetry!
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Date: 8/11/2024 8:04:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/10/2024 10:26:00 AM
An interesting look at how somebody was how they changed and how they stayed the same. Welcome to poetry soup!
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