Alexis Bennett Poet Couplet

You Know He's the One

Breaths by one who shelters fear,
That whisper given to your ear.

The hand you hold with shaken sound,
The arms that cradle you on the ground. 

As fearful tear runs down your cheek,
He wipes them away, your heart to seek.

And with a gentle kiss, replies,
You my love have beautiful eyes.

You blush in return and meet his gaze,
Forgetting all the horrible days.

Heart now pounding out your chest,
You know he's the one, he's the best.

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Robert Pettit January 28, 2014 at 12:39 PM Nice way to express your feelings in rhyming couplets. Just remove the "a" in "shealters". Alexis Bennett January 29, 2014 at 8:52 AM Ok. Thanks Robert. I missed that one. Lol. :-)

Kaye S- January 20, 2014 at 3:25 PM And lucky are those who find their 'one'.... You've put Beautiful thoughts in your poem, I agree, it's the heart that would know... Alexis Bennett January 29, 2014 at 8:54 AM Thanks for your words Kayne. I'm glad you liked it. :-)

Sarai Virden January 19, 2014 at 4:38 AM Beautifully penned Alexis! Alexis Bennett January 19, 2014 at 7:33 PM Thanks Sarai. I enjoy reading your poems. And your comments!

Frederic Parker January 18, 2014 at 12:00 PM your poem discribes the warm comforting sanctuary of love....thank you for visiting my post...Frederic Alexis Bennett January 18, 2014 at 12:27 PM And thank you for your kind words.

Bl Devnath January 18, 2014 at 11:41 AM A place, perhaps lucky one is there. Excellent poem expressing beautiful heartfelt words of own. Loved always, my poet friend, bl Alexis Bennett January 18, 2014 at 11:43 AM Thanks so much bl. I'm glad you liked it.

Aiyah Torres January 17, 2014 at 9:14 AM He's The One.... __where in Earth we can find that one??__..he he.. nice poem, Alexis!!! ,,keep penning :)) Alexis Bennett January 17, 2014 at 4:04 PM Thanks. You too. Aiyah Torres January 17, 2014 at 3:52 PM ask him..lol!! :o)) have a great weekend to us!! :)) Alexis Bennett January 17, 2014 at 9:16 AM Haha. Thanks AiyaH. I think I've found him though...maybe he has another brother I don't know about! Lol. ;-)