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You kissed me today

A dreamy morning dawned a glistening day
Sketching gilded opulence on rising instincts
Carrying my voices whispered in the winds
Evoking your name softly in ornate lyrics
Vying for your attention in tenor of music
Saying hello fondly to deliver my message

Hearing my pleas you engaged the evening
In amorous feelings boasting zealous verses
Wrapping my words in cadence of romance
As galactic entourage brought out the stars
Opening the curtains to cosmic orchestra
Wooing your heart, inviting your response

And you replied boldly holding my embrace
Deciphering my quest, you kissed me today

February 12, 2019

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Date: 2/17/2019 8:25:00 AM
You worked hard during the day to stoke the romantic atmosphere, Vijay, and it was not in vain...evening brought you desired results! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:57:00 PM
Many thanks Paul. Regards.
Date: 2/14/2019 1:54:00 PM
Beautiful write Vijay..Best wishes..
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Date: 2/17/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 2/14/2019 12:37:00 PM
How wonderful it must be to "decipher" the message of carried by dawn, Vijay. A stunningly beautiful poem. Best wishes for the music contest, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn..appreciate the kind remarks.
Date: 2/13/2019 8:00:00 PM
gorgeous imagery, Vijay. So romantic.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/14/2019 7:34:00 AM
Many thanks, Andrea.
Date: 2/13/2019 1:24:00 PM
What an amazing love poem - the romanticism in it is exotic and enticing - love this write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 2:29:00 PM
Your generous feedback is much appreciated..many thanks for your kind remarks, Jennifer.
Date: 2/13/2019 11:53:00 AM
Apotheosis of romanticism by a romantic heart dearest friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 2:28:00 PM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, my friend.
Date: 2/13/2019 3:57:00 AM
You set the stage... opened the curtains and delivered a KISS...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 7:22:00 AM
Sometimes it happens that way..many thanks Arturo.
Date: 2/12/2019 10:19:00 PM
Nicely done, Vijay, poetic as ever.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Lawrence..appreciate the visit and kind remarks.
Date: 2/12/2019 9:47:00 PM
Exactly!!! "Evoking your name softly in ornate lyrics. Vying for your attention in tenor of music" A kiss to linger in a moment like this. Yes, of course. I absolutely love the way your thoughts caress the page. This is so beautiful and romantic. A fav. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 7:20:00 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback, Brandy. Appreciate the time you devote to visit and write detailed comments. You are a messenger of goodwill.
Date: 2/12/2019 2:28:00 PM
vijay, what a tantalizing work of art... a day or two to go and it's happy hearts day.... enchanting, to say the least...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2019 3:41:00 PM
Glad to read your generous feedback..thanks for your visit and comments, Nette.
Date: 2/12/2019 12:08:00 PM
Great way to end the day. Romance at its best.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2019 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Victor..much appreciate your feedback.
Date: 2/12/2019 10:17:00 AM
Another wonderful poem, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2019 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Janice..I'm glad to read your comments.
Date: 2/12/2019 10:16:00 AM
Oh, this is SO NICE! I love it. Smooth and well written Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2019 3:38:00 PM
Much appreciate your encouragement..many thanks Heidi.
Date: 2/12/2019 9:32:00 AM
Well done Vijay. You are a master of romance!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thank for that vote of confidence..many thanks Frances.
Date: 2/12/2019 9:29:00 AM
Vijay, you are THE romantic. I hope you are received to the extent of your love. What a winner!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2019 3:37:00 PM
Thank you Avis..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 2/12/2019 8:03:00 AM
Well written romantic verse Vijay, You have a talent for this kind of poetry. Tom.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2019 3:37:00 PM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks Tom..many thanks.