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You Kissed Me Today

A dreamy morning dawned a glistening day Sketching gilded opulence on rising instincts Carrying my voices whispered in the winds Evoking your name softly in ornate lyrics Vying for your attention in tenor of music Saying hello fondly to deliver my message Hearing my pleas you engaged the evening In amorous feelings boasting zealous verses Wrapping my words in cadence of romance As galactic entourage brought out the stars Opening the curtains to cosmic orchestra Wooing your heart, inviting your response And you replied boldly holding my embrace Deciphering my quest, you kissed me today February 12, 2019 Placed first in late February 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/30/2020 11:20:00 AM

Beautiful images portrayed here, Vijay. You always write these types of poems perfectly :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/25/2019 7:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.

Sherilynn Kucharek

Date: 2/23/2019 9:40:00 AM

Wowzers! Quite a Beautifully descriptive journey to that kiss. I loved this! Congratulations on your win. Much deserved!

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/23/2019 8:25:00 AM

Quite the dreamy message, congratulations Vijay...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/22/2019 9:12:00 PM

These words can stand alone :) The title is a poem in itself. I am happy seeing this in the winners circle. So deserving. Congratulations Vijay. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Brandy.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/22/2019 4:28:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/17/2019 8:25:00 AM

You worked hard during the day to stoke the romantic atmosphere, Vijay, and it was not in vain...evening brought you desired results! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:57:00 PM

Many thanks Paul. Regards.

Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2019 1:54:00 PM

Beautiful write Vijay..Best wishes..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2019 12:37:00 PM

How wonderful it must be to "decipher" the message of carried by dawn, Vijay. A stunningly beautiful poem. Best wishes for the music contest, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn..appreciate the kind remarks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 8:00:00 PM

gorgeous imagery, Vijay. So romantic.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/14/2019 7:34:00 AM

Many thanks, Andrea.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/13/2019 1:24:00 PM

What an amazing love poem - the romanticism in it is exotic and enticing - love this write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 2:29:00 PM

Your generous feedback is much appreciated..many thanks for your kind remarks, Jennifer.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/13/2019 11:53:00 AM

Apotheosis of romanticism by a romantic heart dearest friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 2:28:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/13/2019 3:57:00 AM

You set the stage... opened the curtains and delivered a KISS...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 7:22:00 AM

Sometimes it happens that way..many thanks Arturo.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 2/12/2019 10:19:00 PM

Nicely done, Vijay, poetic as ever.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Lawrence..appreciate the visit and kind remarks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/12/2019 9:47:00 PM

Exactly!!! "Evoking your name softly in ornate lyrics. Vying for your attention in tenor of music" A kiss to linger in a moment like this. Yes, of course. I absolutely love the way your thoughts caress the page. This is so beautiful and romantic. A fav. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2019 7:20:00 AM

Thank you for your kind feedback, Brandy. Appreciate the time you devote to visit and write detailed comments. You are a messenger of goodwill.