You Just Couldn'T

YOU   JUST    COULDN’T

When we were small  you threatened to steal my toys,
But you always  liked my pretty hair   - so you just couldn’t.   
When we married you wanted to give me the most  
Expensive  wedding  but  you had no job so you just couldn’t.
It was the happiest day in my life all the same. 
When our kids were naughty  you  said 
You would punish them  after chores   
But you were so close to them, 
Played and talked with them  so much,  you just couldn’t. 
Then  you went off to war  and promised me to stay alive.
In the  worst  battle your four buddies were trapped  -
You knew that rescue was almost impossible   -   
You thought of leaving  them,  but you  just couldn’t.
Went out to get them,  were  shot, tried to get to your feet 
And struggle back to the lines  and you  just  couldn’t.
You said you would keep your promise to me to come home alive; 
But you just  couldn’t.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Loving Iii Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 4:16 PM
i cant comment.
Bauer Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 5:10 AM
this poem is amazing! it actually brought tears to my eyes, which never happens to me from reading a poem. very powerful and just perfect!
Beck Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:47 AM
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