You In Me Ii

The test of time dispels all lies,
And true intentions are revealed;
You said you'd keep me at the top,
And I believe that's how you feel.

Because you always make me smile,
Whether we're out or tryna chill,
You've seen me open, in the raw,
Flaws and all, yet and still..

You accept me for who I am.
You never judge. You let me live.
You never try to fill my mind
With fake perfection and vain ideas

Of changing me, I really think
That you're the one who I can give
All of my trust, my love and lust;
Just between us, my focus is...

To give you bliss and happiness,
To keep you up and never down.
To give you pleasure and never pain;
You are my king, you wear the crown.

I want you high and satisfied,
Feeling good, safe and sound,
At the top, comforted,
With my love all around.

I'll never leave or let us break,
You and I will always win.
Whatever it takes, despite mistakes,
I'll be beside you 'til the end,

Right or wrong, good or bad,
On my love, you can depend.
In the raw, flaws and all,
You are my lover and my friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/1/2016 2:43:00 AM
Very nicely expressed, Ashley - A lovely tribute! My best regards. :) john P.s A seven for love!
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