You In Me

you are the glint in my eye
you are the sinew in my arm
the very DNA in my cells
you are my offering of time

father, your actual bones bore
me through childish dreams
and youthful ranting angers
to find as i pulled away

as far as i could be myself
that circles go 'round to find
myself back at my beginning
there with your corny jokes

and light admonitions to me
to be a man, not unfeeling,
but gently strong, happily
human as you were in yours

my half-life or half-my-life
is owed to all of you
given as your progeny
my own, my founder, my father

© Goode Guy 2011-06-18

for father James M.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Toledo Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 9:26 PM
Very beautiful and meaningful poem. Thank you for sharing!! God bless you!
Brown Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 6:00 AM
Inspiration has filled the pages of poetry over this weekend here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to have been able to read your poetry here today Goode Guy. Have a wonderful Sunday I will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol
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June 18, 2011 at 6:22 PM
Lovely passionate expressions on the love of the father when the father's day is round the corner, Goode
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