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You Hit Me

You hit me and I cannot believe it! I even got to get confirmation Slow steps to my destination Understanding is coming to me My eyes now open to truly see So vivid, so real I actually fell It lasted really only a little spell But it has done something of a lifetime The things I wanted to know Thoughts recurring in my mind Focusing only on your glow Now I realize need to act in kind You truly and fully run the show Wow! how gloriously filling Now I am reassured in you You hit me and I couldn't remain standing Hearing things going on around me I just couldn't speak Nothing but you now I seek Stronger, gradually till finally The ultimate beginning Also like a dream, golden streets Walls of jasper, sapphire, sardius Others too, very precious stones

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Date: 3/8/2016 11:22:00 AM
Lovely imagery
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