You Hit Me
You hit me and I cannot believe it!
I even got to get confirmation
Slow steps to my destination
Understanding is coming to me
My eyes now open to truly see
So vivid, so real I actually fell
It lasted really only a little spell
But it has done something of a lifetime
The things I wanted to know
Thoughts recurring in my mind
Focusing only on your glow
Now I realize need to act in kind
You truly and fully run the show
Wow! how gloriously filling
Now I am reassured in you
You hit me and I couldn't remain standing
Hearing things going on around me
I just couldn't speak
Nothing but you now I seek
Stronger, gradually till finally
The ultimate beginning
Also like a dream, golden streets
Walls of jasper, sapphire, sardius
Others too, very precious stones
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