You Have Taken

You have taken the soft peach cream of my youth but I have replaced it with steel and stone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:58 PM
YEs, the sign of a stronger woman. WEll, I enjoyed seeing your monoku collection today!!
Trifiatis Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Marvelous line that depicts a bitter experience! A seven, dear Ingrid!
Ebbs Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 9:05 PM
Excellent one liner...
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