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You Have Had Enough

You're wearing a beautiful designer dress tonight. No doubt some men here think you're a delight. However, your head is starting to spin in a ring. It looks as if you've had too much of a good thing. You're headed to a state that may be embarrassing. That hundred proof hooch is pretty potent stuff. Anybody here can tell that you've had enough. You will look like a first-class fool if you happen to fall off that stool. I will take you home and give you this warning: Be prepared to feel quite sick tomorrow morning.

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Date: 3/11/2021 11:26:00 PM
It is amazing to me that people who fall off the stools think it is funny even as they hit their last brain cell onto a concrete floor. Alcohol. Oh, yes!
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Date: 2/28/2021 4:12:00 PM
Hi Robert , The key to drinking alcohol is knowing your limit. I failed at it miserable, so I stay away from it. Your last two lines are a good reminder of why one shouldn't consume too much booze- Alexis
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