YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN

The house on the corner with the white swing
Candles, wine and dreams
The darkness that loneliness brings
To forgotten mountains
You no longer recall any of it
We once wrote letters to strangers
Pretending they were our friends
But now we leave the candle unlit
Because somehow it no longer matters
I'll be leaving soon
Too quickly to fit in a goodbye
You'll be angry for a while
But your anger will be like
The candle
And I'll be only a stranger
That you once knew

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Date: 3/29/2025 10:12:00 PM
A sad parting means a fresh start. I liked this poem.
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/29/2025 10:23:00 PM
thanks
Date: 3/29/2025 8:00:00 PM
Wow!!! I am reminded of Edgar Allen Poe as I read this. It has a dark, gothic theme to it which could fit a lot of stories! I love how versatile and mysterious this is. Keep writing :3!
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/29/2025 10:22:00 PM
if you like gothic themes check out my short-story on this site. ode to death
Date: 3/29/2025 12:41:00 PM
Agree with Andrea. Has a sad tone
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/29/2025 4:20:00 PM
much of my early work is flat out depressing; it's good but sad. thanks for dropping by and commenting
Date: 3/29/2025 10:20:00 AM
So poignant and emotive. I really like this one.
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/29/2025 4:25:00 PM
thank you
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