Jamie Poole Poet Lyric

You Have Broken My Heart (Originally a Song)

You said you would forever love me
	And that it was always meant to be
	You said you would forever be here
	As the days fade you just disappear


	You have broken my heart
	You have torn me apart
	You have broken my heart
	And everyday I fall apart
	I fall to pieces
	I fall to pieces
	you have broken my heart


	You said to me you would never lie
	Now I can't help but wonder why
        You said to me you would never leave
        Now I can not even believe

        You have broken my heart
	You have torn me apart
	You have broken my heart
	And everyday I fall apart
	I fall to pieces
	I fall to pieces
	you have broken my heart

	You said you would never turn away
	And now I look back on that first day
	You said you would never let me down
	And now I lay crumpled on the ground

        You have broken my heart
	You have torn me apart
	You have broken my heart
	And everyday I fall apart
	I fall to pieces
	I fall to pieces
	you have broken my heart

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Jay Loveless March 3, 2010 at 11:01 AM This is beautiful. I absolutly adore it, it brings tears to my eyes, and tears at my heart and soul. Its filled with emotion, and hurt, and my favorite by you thus far. beautiful really. always, Rain Essesnce.

Constance La France November 9, 2009 at 6:09 PM Jamie, this poem I think is your best. It is exceptional, filled with emotion, beautifully written. Now, you asked me about the use of brackets in my writing, did you not hear the echo(the vibration)the shadow of a thought. This is a style used by the great poet E.E Cummings which I love. I use it often in my writing

Carol Sunshine Brown November 5, 2009 at 11:13 AM Wonderful writing Jamie it was a joy to read thank you. I wish you a fun filled inspiring day. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick November 5, 2009 at 10:52 AM Interesting sad write. Keep writing. Sara

Courtney Hallett November 4, 2009 at 11:19 AM Really good. Sounds interesting. I like it.