You Have Become My Everything

When I look at you I see the sunshine
In your eyes 
I see the depth of your love 
As deep the ocean
When you smile at me
My knees are weak 
I realized our love is eternal
Just how much you mean to me
When you look at me
And I look at you
I am mad about you
And you’re mad about me too
You broke down my walls
You made me forget what I know of love
And showed me the way to true love
In a moment you have became my everything 
In front of the world I pledge
I found my purpose in you
My last breath belongs to you
You make my heart stop
With your touch
Every step I’ll take with you
My baby
I fell in love with you
I give you my all
Everybody said we would fall
They said I could never love you
See where we are now 
Dancing tonight
Forever by your side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/28/2013 5:27:00 PM
Hi Persian once again, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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Date: 4/28/2013 5:55:00 PM
Hi Linda, Nice to meet you. thank you for the warm welcome and inviting me to your challenge. I will most certainly have a look. May your week ahead hold many lovely surprises :) <3 Roshan Mumtaz
Date: 4/23/2013 10:56:00 PM
Persian"Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:55:00 AM
Thank you very much to Poetry Soup for the delight of featuring this poem among 48 other. Lastly thank you to the readers / viewers for making the above mentioned possible. God Bless thake care and keep smiling Roshan :)
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Date: 4/22/2013 8:59:00 AM
Very nice poem. Congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:21:00 AM
am humbled, thank you Mathew Horstkotter sir, for taking the time to read and comment. :)
Date: 4/20/2013 1:51:00 PM
If it was a prayer i'd screem my AMEN!!!, GR8 STUFF, SURELY YOU ARE RIDING ON THE WINGS OF LOVE
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Date: 4/21/2013 12:39:00 PM
thank you Patrick Niqros. Indeed Patrick, Divine love carries me through life. :)
Date: 4/19/2013 12:25:00 PM
- It is beautiful! - Welcome to P-Soup !- Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2013 3:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne Lise Andresen, for your comment and warm welcome :)
Date: 4/19/2013 9:17:00 AM
Persian :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/19/2013 3:20:00 PM
thank you very much SKAT-SIN THE- ,,, am sure to read, rate and comment. :)
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