You Had Me Fool

Sometimes I sit all alone,and remember all the promises we made together,than I see them fade away in the wind,kind like the petals of a flower, were feelings over come my fear,than I remember you had me on a spell,you deserve a round of applause,you had me fool, you always was embarrass of me,according to you I was the clown,were all the tears you gave me,were behind the jokes i made,and the smile I kept from fallen down,you deserve a round of applause,what's your next trick?,try to break my heart,or better yet,lie to me, make me fall back to your arms, what's the matter cat got your tongue,that's not suppost to happen to you, your like the best when it comes to magic, you once told me I was your light,trust me not the light of  the dance floor,more like that old abandon light bulb in your closet door, you deserve a round of applause,you had me fool,I could swarn,that trick was real,you gave me so much to think about,and tears to deal, what's your next trick? Run away with someone else and forget about me? Do me a favor and erase my mind,and blind my eyes with more lies, you can't miss ,it works every time, for your last final trick, steal the show with your screams and hits,this time I'll know,I'm not to blame,you can hand cuff me,and rip my heart once again,don't you worry is just a stage,sometimes I sit here all alone as I turn the page,the rip pages of our love story,I finally came to the end,did you know she didn't love him cuz he wasn't cool,oh wow! you deserve a round of applause you had me fool.
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Date: 10/16/2013 10:08:00 AM
Hello Guillermo, such deep imagery. I've been fooled once to many times, that's what loves does to us. But, in this case and this poem, it's hard to accept such a terrible thing she put you through... maybe she did you a favor... in the long run she saved you from making a total a$$ out of you. hope that made sense... enjoyed...Linda
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Date: 10/16/2013 11:57:00 AM
Thank you ! :)
Date: 10/16/2013 4:29:00 AM
Your words are very deep and it is impossible to read without some emotional pain. I am glad you have posted your words for us to read. You express yourself very well, and we appreciate you sharing with us. Writing is very therapeutic. I hope you continue writing. You are very good. Always, Laura
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