You Had Me

I told her I liked her, she told 
me she treasured our 
friendship more, I told her I 
would wait until she feels the 
same, I waited for her & she 
told me that she had found 
someone else, I convinced 
myself that am the one for 
her and still waited, then she 
came and swept me off my 
feet & I fall even harder, then 
You came and told me you 
loved me and I said 'am sorry 
but when you had me you 
didn't realize what you had. 
Someone has found me & 
thank you for driving me into 
her arms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 12, 2014 at 9:14 PM
Wamulume, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
Perera Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 4:42 AM
Enjoyed very much !!
Ujunwa Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Good ending wamulume. Life almost always have such turn around.
Mehta Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 4:51 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this wee, wamulume
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Oh what an emotional write glad it had a happy ending. Jan
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