You Got You

Listen, said you only got you cause  homie you see I see you still struggling  through it, running it through ,it made you if nothing  else, noone owing, I'm owning I'm on ,it's flowing steady always, I'm going,I'm ready ,already gone, I'm saying like..

Like saying I'm gone, already ready, I'm going ,I'm always steady flowing, its on, I'm owning, I'm owing noone else nothing, if you made it through it, running it through struggling, still you see I see you homie ,cause you got only you, said listen.
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April 1, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Nice to see this one again, Busy Blake. LINDA
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March 14, 2016 at 1:15 PM
- Thank you for your first poem,Busy :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:01 PM
By the way, this is an interesting poem. I see no one bu me. :)
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March 12, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Busy Blake, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Blake Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Is this a palindrome poem with words not letters
A   Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Busy, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Blake Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 9:36 PM
I read a couple and enjoy the personifications given ty for reaching out.,,madlove allday ...busy
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