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You Gave Up On Us

You gave up on us My love for you was strong enough to get both of us by But you gave up on us. I wanted only to love you I wanted to be with you Through your highs and lows Through your bitter and sweet Through your narrow and wide I wanted to be there To love you more and more But You gave up on us. You gave up on us Walked away from us Destroyed what we've built Disassembled what we've assembled... You gave up on us! You gave up on us! You gave up on us! You walked away from Me Us You walked away You gave up on us I had to journey on With my pride still intact With my head not bowed Because you gave up on us, Mmboneni!

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Date: 2/23/2025 3:50:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 7/21/2014 3:20:00 AM
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