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I wish.. I wish.. I wish.. I wish to envision only your images in my dreams.. I wish to chant only your lovely name in my mind.. I have hidden you like a tender bud inside my heart.. Oh..My dear: I love you~ without you .. I can't even assume.. if I could be alive even a milli second. I am just a flesh filled body~ But your presence initiates life inside me.. I am just the lashes~ But you are the sight of my eyes... I am just the heart~ But your the beats inside it.. In this dry life if you aren't beside me I would represent a fish struggling without water. Whenever I sleep it's just your name I find on my lips and whisper thoroughly in my heart So understand it's "YOU" just You..!! Even if death knocks on my door I would embrace it happily uttering your name before entering the grave without any regret. It's suffocating to imagine a world without you.... 27-5-2020 Second place in the Contest. Note1:*A world without You Poetry Contest* Sponsored by JCB Burl First place in the Contest:-) Note2:BRIAN'S Select 3,any form, any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Date: 6/1/2020 3:45:00 PM
I love the way your words reflect the emotions of a beautiful love always. Keep writing Deepa. Your muse brings a smile on many faces. Congratulations on your win :)
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/2/2020 6:12:00 AM
Aww...I was waiting for your review mam.Somehow I made it .:-) received lovely blessings from you.I am blushing here looking at your appreciation:-):-) It's mostly because I love whomever I know ..basically love everyone around me:-) Thankyou very much for the support. My best wishes for you too.I know your doing well always with your great works.Keep going.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa
Date: 5/31/2020 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, V. , I like the line, I am just a flesh filled body~ But your presence initiates life inside me. Hugs Eve
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/31/2020 11:43:00 PM
Thankyou for your kind appreciation and support mam.I am glad atleast one of my line made you look at me after long time:-):-) Thanks for the wonderful review mam:-) And... Congratulations for your placement too..:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa
Date: 5/27/2020 1:55:00 PM
Hello Deepa, this is lovely. to me it sounds like a prayer. I like this very much. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/28/2020 1:33:00 PM
Hello Depa, Yes I have enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day myfriend.
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/28/2020 7:14:00 AM
Hello Darlene mam, Yes It's kind off a yearning wish of a girl.Awaiting for her lover's reply for her proposal.:-):-) I am happy that you liked this piece mam..:-) Take care.Have a beautiful day