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You For Me

I wish.. I wish.. I wish..
I wish to envision only your images  
in my dreams..
I wish to chant only your lovely name
in my mind..
I have hidden you like a tender bud
inside my heart..
Oh..My dear: I love you~ 
without you ..
I can't even assume.. if I could be
alive even a milli second.

I am just a flesh filled body~
But your presence initiates life inside me..
I am just the lashes~
But you are the sight of my eyes...
I am just the heart~
But your the beats inside it..
In this dry life if you aren't beside me
I would represent a fish struggling without water.

Whenever I sleep it's just your name I find on my lips 
and whisper thoroughly in my heart
So understand it's "YOU" just You..!!
Even if death knocks on my door
I would embrace it happily uttering your name
before entering the grave without any regret.
It's suffocating to imagine a world without you....

27-5-2020

~DEEPA~

Second place in the Contest.
Note1:*A world without You Poetry Contest*
Sponsored by JCB Burl

First place in the Contest:-)
Note2:BRIAN'S Select 3,any form,
any theme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Aditi Mishra Date: 6/1/2020 3:45:00 PM I love the way your words reflect the emotions of a beautiful love always. Keep writing Deepa. Your muse brings a smile on many faces. Congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply V. Deepa Date: 6/2/2020 6:12:00 AM Aww...I was waiting for your review mam.Somehow I made it .:-) received lovely blessings from you.I am blushing here looking at your appreciation:-):-) It's mostly because I love whomever I know ..basically love everyone around me:-) Thankyou very much for the support. My best wishes for you too.I know your doing well always with your great works.Keep going.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa

Eve Roper Date: 5/31/2020 12:19:00 PM Congratulations on your win, V. , I like the line, I am just a flesh filled body~ But your presence initiates life inside me. Hugs Eve Login to Reply V. Deepa Date: 5/31/2020 11:43:00 PM Thankyou for your kind appreciation and support mam.I am glad atleast one of my line made you look at me after long time:-):-) Thanks for the wonderful review mam:-) And... Congratulations for your placement too..:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/27/2020 1:55:00 PM Hello Deepa, this is lovely. to me it sounds like a prayer. I like this very much. Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/28/2020 1:33:00 PM Hello Depa, Yes I have enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day myfriend. V. Deepa Date: 5/28/2020 7:14:00 AM Hello Darlene mam, Yes It's kind off a yearning wish of a girl.Awaiting for her lover's reply for her proposal.:-):-) I am happy that you liked this piece mam..:-) Take care.Have a beautiful day