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You Follow My Drift

my last new poem was the penultimate one and second to none until this one came along now i pen ultimate one By David Kavanagh

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Alexis Y.

Date: 6/8/2021 6:35:00 AM

WoW! David, You pen such deep poems that your reader think. Good wordplay; I hope this isn't your last write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/8/2021 8:18:00 AM

Heya Alexis, thanks for looking in, this one is a wordplay i hope, don’t want to be overly prophetic, but who knows, life is notoriously fickle, thanks again, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/8/2021 4:44:00 AM

I was surprised to read this wonderful Tanka, and I hope that it will not be the final one if you create this new poetry. Have a wonderful day, my friend David

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/8/2021 5:06:00 AM

I penned this last night, but fell asleep, luckily I woke up for work and got to post it today, thank you Lasaad for looking in, cheers David

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/8/2021 4:19:00 AM

Such a brilliant play of words, David, hope this is not your last one in truth:)

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/8/2021 5:02:00 AM

So do I Jo, such is life one never knows when we pen our final words, it’s meant as a word play with a little message perhaps, cheers David