David Kavanagh Poet Tanka

You Follow My Drift

my last new poem 
          was the penultimate one
              and second to none 
          until this one came along 
           now i pen ultimate one 

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David Kavanagh

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Alexis Y. June 8, 2021 at 6:35 AM WoW! David, You pen such deep poems that your reader think. Good wordplay; I hope this isn't your last write. Have a great day:-) Alexis David Kavanagh June 8, 2021 at 8:18 AM Heya Alexis, thanks for looking in, this one is a wordplay i hope, don’t want to be overly prophetic, but who knows, life is notoriously fickle, thanks again, cheers David

Sotto Poet June 8, 2021 at 4:44 AM I was surprised to read this wonderful Tanka, and I hope that it will not be the final one if you create this new poetry. Have a wonderful day, my friend David David Kavanagh June 8, 2021 at 5:06 AM I penned this last night, but fell asleep, luckily I woke up for work and got to post it today, thank you Lasaad for looking in, cheers David

Joanna Daniel June 8, 2021 at 4:19 AM Such a brilliant play of words, David, hope this is not your last one in truth:) David Kavanagh June 8, 2021 at 5:02 AM So do I Jo, such is life one never knows when we pen our final words, it’s meant as a word play with a little message perhaps, cheers David