Jack Ellison Poet Narrative

You Fill My Days

You fill my days with happiness
With joy I never knew
There is no greater love my dear
Than the love I feel for you
You fill my days with kindness
You set my poor heart free
I can't begin to tell you
How much you mean to me
You fill my days with friendship
The kind that lasts and lasts
The purest kind of friendship
What more could one man ask
You fill my days with total joy
Like when I was just a child
The first time I could ride a bicycle
The clown that made me smile
You fill my days with quiet peace
That blows my cares away
With simple words of tenderness
You brighten up my day
But most of all sweet lady
You fill my days with spice
I'm never bored when you are near
My love it's been a slice

© Jack Ellison 2014

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Laura Breidenthal April 19, 2015 at 10:41 PM These heartfelt words are so, so touching. These feelings are magic, and it is kind of you to share the magic with us poets on the soup. A real favorite here! Always, Laura

Liam Mcdaid October 15, 2014 at 12:25 AM congratulations jack truly outstanding piece dear friend beautifully penned Jack Ellison October 15, 2014 at 7:13 AM Thank you my good friend... much appreciated! Jack

Tim Smith October 14, 2014 at 8:30 PM Congrats my friend...quite stunning Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 8:55 PM Thank you my loyal friend!

Brenda Meier-Hans October 14, 2014 at 4:30 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Jack. A vet lovely poem. Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 7:09 PM Happy you liked it Brenda! Many thanks, Jack XXX

Verlena S. Walker October 14, 2014 at 2:47 PM Beautiful Jack Ellison and congratulations on being chosen as the poem of the day. Verlena Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 7:08 PM Thank you Verlena... much appreciated dear friend! Huggs XXX

Gary Bateman October 14, 2014 at 10:08 AM Jack, A most wonderful poem here Sir!! Congratulations to you on having your work selected for Poem of the Day. Indeed, very impressive!! All the Best, Gary Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 7:07 PM Many thanks my friend... much appreciated! Cheers Jack

Willow Lawrence October 14, 2014 at 7:11 AM Enjoyed this so much! Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 8:47 AM BTW... love your name Willow! Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 8:06 AM You are very sweet! I believe this is the first time we've talked! Let's do it again! Huggsies, Jack XXX

Eileen Manassian October 14, 2014 at 6:49 AM I'm so happy to see this here, Jack! :) Betty is so proud of you! HUGS! Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 8:04 AM Dear dear Betty Boop! As always, you brighten up my day! Love, Kenny XXX

Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2014 at 3:14 AM - Congratulations on : "Poem of the Day",Jack - Lovely poem ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 8:03 AM We haven't talked in a long time... we must correct that! Thank you dear lady! Loving hugs as always, Jack XXX

Maurice Yvonne October 14, 2014 at 2:46 AM Excellent, most enjoyable. Congratulations on your poem being chosen as poem of the day. Jack Ellison October 14, 2014 at 8:01 AM Many thanks my friend! What a big surprise when I fired up my old computer this morning! Thanks again!

Timothy Hicks October 13, 2014 at 7:24 PM Sweet, sincere, and has Jack Ellison written all over it. Love your writing as always! Though as a kid I don't believe I smiled at a clown... but ran away in fear... ha ha. Man, I've been absent from this site for so long!! I need to catch up with my Soup friends :) Jack Ellison October 13, 2014 at 7:33 PM WOWSER! Where have you been??? Happy to hear from you again, my friend... yeehaw!

Dorian Petersen Potter October 13, 2014 at 5:18 PM Oh Jack my dear friend. This is so awesome! Gosh you're so sweet and romantic! Your wife must be for sure a very lucky lady to have you and writing something so beautiful like this poem. :)I give you a 7! You very sweet man hubby poet, you deserve it! I wished my ex had loved me and done that! Maybe then we could still be married now. :( Hugs! Love and light! Take good care my dear friend! xxxx D. Jack Ellison October 13, 2014 at 5:57 PM Wow! That ex of yours must have been totally out of his mind!!!! All I see is a caring, passionate soul! Your loving heart comes shining through... big squeezie hugs and big smackers on those ruby red lips of yours!!! XOXOX

Eileen Manassian October 12, 2014 at 9:40 AM JACK....READ MY LATEST POEM! Jack Ellison October 13, 2014 at 7:39 AM Read it... I am totally honoured! You are the first to write a poem about me! Thank you dear sweet Eileen! Hugs and kisses! XOXOX

Eileen Manassian October 12, 2014 at 9:25 AM HOW INCREDIBLY SWEET IS THIS??? Lovely, Kenny. You are a sweetie pie. I should write about you for the pie contest. Hugs! ;) Jack Ellison October 13, 2014 at 7:43 AM Cathie and I both think you are a real sweetie pie dear Miss Boop! I read your comments to her! She thinks you are a very special lady too! Big big squeezy hugs and smoochy kisses... Kenny XOXOX

Carol Eastman October 12, 2014 at 9:14 AM That one literally SANG from your heart! Dragon and I are REALLY impressed... Now he's decided to try to sing his love for his MaMa... That's me... Unfortunately, his catawaulering is giving me a headache... Hummm...I think he's more sooted to a torch song... Get it... fire... sooted... torch song? UMMM... Think I need another cup of coffee... and some more meds...LOL Jack Ellison October 13, 2014 at 7:35 AM WHAT is "catawaulering"??? Enjoy your second cup of java! XOXOX

Jerry T Curtis October 12, 2014 at 8:10 AM Perfect Jack, and the flow ! I never knew that you felt that way about me-----just kidding---it's a beautiful poem and a real keeper. A poem to be proud of. Jack Ellison October 13, 2014 at 7:32 AM Well it's out in the open now! LOL Thanks buddy! Cheers!