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You Excited Me

My heart is broken. My mind is weeping. My life is threatened. I lost my trust. You excited me for a run, You robbed me for fun, I misplaced my worshipping, I shall stop my praise. You treated me so fair, My honour is burning, Your ties are so strong, I can’t walk longer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 11/30/2013 6:04:00 PM
I like beats
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Date: 11/30/2013 11:34:00 AM
Daljit, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Have fun and take care during the new seasons Holidays.. Always <3 =LINDA
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