You Excited Me
My heart is broken.
My mind is weeping.
My life is threatened.
I lost my trust.
You excited me for a run,
You robbed me for fun,
I misplaced my worshipping,
I shall stop my praise.
You treated me so fair,
My honour is burning,
Your ties are so strong,
I can’t walk longer.
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