You Entered

you entered my mind, i can't make you go
even though you want me to, I know
you entered my heart
it's broken apart
you entered my soul and made it feel whole
you entered my world and made me feel alive
you exited, i hope i'll survive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A  Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 9:58 AM
trisha evensen, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace