You Enslaved Me

My pureness has been taken, My heart has fully awaken

I was used and abused, I was hit hard when I pulled the wrong card.

I fell in love from a relationship made from above. You fooled me you tricked me.  You put
a sward right through me.

I gave up my Husband for you, You where supposed to be my boo. But when Rich asked you if
I was your *itch 

You turned around like you never new me. 

You made love to me, You held me like I was a porcelain doll.  Now you ignore me like I'm
an invisible wall.

You took my faith, Turned me in to a wraith.   

Trust, Love and Hope are some things that God gave me but you enslaved me




FOR THE BETRAYAL CONTEST 

THANK YOU  Carolyn Devonshire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/25/2010 4:49:00 AM
I say from the poetry I am reading this morning it seems it was an inspiring weekend for all. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Amber. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:02:00 PM
Well, gosh,AMber, he really did a number on you! Those kinds of men are everywhere. You have to be so careful! I wish you well in the contest and I hope you get your "pureness" back and your life in order! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:43:00 PM
This would make a great entry for the "Betrayal" competition, Amber. The reader can really sense deep pain and I hope you find someone who truly loves you. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:31:00 PM
Interesting write that should be educational for the youth of the world. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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