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You Don'T Know What You Got Till It's Gone

“Don’t it always seem to go that you don’t know what you got till it’s gone...” from the song Big Yellow Taxi by Joni Mitchell Age four on the ice with double-bladed skates Big sis skated slowly looking down at me How well I remember the way she would wait Always watching over me filled with such glee When I was nine she married into money Country club lifestyle, hand-sewn silver fox coat Her branch took a split from our family tree As the years passed, she grew more and more remote How I miss those days when she would lend a hand To a smiling child who was her devotee Poor and not as pretty, I live in nowhere land And my sis continues looking down at me Dedicated to my sister, whose companionship and love I miss. For Chris Matt’s “Favorite Music Lyrics” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/21/2020 11:06:00 AM
Hey my lady... Just wanted to say u can reach me at: keithhunt41@yahoo.com (my flip phone is too antiquated for soupmails)
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:27:00 PM
A great win and a wondeful song to write about... Congrats my dear friend... love Michael
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Chris' "Favorite Music Lyrics" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:13:00 AM
Sadder than losing her by death. I hope she sees this Carolyn. Congratulations on your win. Saw my brother yesterday. He's hanging in there. Stay well. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/22/2011 1:33:00 AM
a searing song, carols... my special congrats on your shimmering win!... :) hugggs!
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:58:00 AM
Hi Carolyn congrats for the win, wonderful dedication for your sister hope she will read this. Take care, Cheryl
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Date: 8/21/2011 6:12:00 PM
hey Carolyn congrats on another superb win David
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:11:00 AM
Such a shame when these things happen in families. Fortunately, all my family members are quite poor and are still close, so there is no snobbery at all... LOL! A heartfelt write, Carolyn. Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:49:00 PM
GREAT choice of song and its meaning for you. I really like this! sure hope that chiro helps ya, sweetie. DOn't trust a damn doctor. YOu have to check out all the alternate stuff that you can too. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/21/2011 11:44:00 AM
Sad. Seems to be the way with some. Look for a reunion someday. That seems to be the way too. Love, daver
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:15:00 AM
Ah, glad you wrote this piece, love. Send it to her...
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:00:00 AM
money is ugly. Cinderella did this song as well. It is good to write about wounds. I do it a lot. thanks for sharing!
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:24:00 PM
Why do money change people?i dnt know... Childhood memories are always nostalgically beautiful,a very sentimental poem sweet Car..hope you are fine..hugs!
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:59:00 PM
An emotional write here Carolyn.Enjoyed.How are you?
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Date: 7/20/2011 5:40:00 PM
Sad that you have lost contact with your sis....call her! I bet she misses you too!!
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