You Don'T Know What You Got Till It's Gone

“Don’t it always seem to go that you don’t know what you got till it’s gone...” from 
the song Big Yellow Taxi by Joni Mitchell



Age four on the ice with double-bladed skates
    Big sis skated slowly looking down at me
How well I remember the way she would wait
    Always watching over me filled with such glee

When I was nine she married into money
    Country club lifestyle, hand-sewn silver fox coat
Her branch took a split from our family tree
    As the years passed, she grew more and more remote

How I miss those days when she would lend a hand
    To a smiling child who was her devotee
Poor and not as pretty, I live in nowhere land
    And my sis continues looking down at me



Dedicated to my sister, whose companionship and love I miss.
For Chris Matt’s “Favorite Music Lyrics” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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O.J. Hunt Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Hey my lady... Just wanted to say u can reach me at: [email protected] (my flip phone is too antiquated for soupmails)
Falotico Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 4:27 PM
A great win and a wondeful song to write about... Congrats my dear friend... love Michael
Brown Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Chris' "Favorite Music Lyrics" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Sadder than losing her by death. I hope she sees this Carolyn. Congratulations on your win. Saw my brother yesterday. He's hanging in there. Stay well. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 1:33 AM
a searing song, carols... my special congrats on your shimmering win!... :) hugggs!
Aldea Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:58 AM
Hi Carolyn congrats for the win, wonderful dedication for your sister hope she will read this. Take care, Cheryl
Williams Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 6:12 PM
hey Carolyn congrats on another superb win David
Zzzzz Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 6:11 AM
Such a shame when these things happen in families. Fortunately, all my family members are quite poor and are still close, so there is no snobbery at all... LOL! A heartfelt write, Carolyn. Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 3:49 PM
GREAT choice of song and its meaning for you. I really like this! sure hope that chiro helps ya, sweetie. DOn't trust a damn doctor. YOu have to check out all the alternate stuff that you can too. LUv, Andrea
Austin Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 11:44 AM
Sad. Seems to be the way with some. Look for a reunion someday. That seems to be the way too. Love, daver
Horne Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Ah, glad you wrote this piece, love. Send it to her...
Mister Roboto Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 2:00 AM
money is ugly. Cinderella did this song as well. It is good to write about wounds. I do it a lot. thanks for sharing!
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:24 PM
Why do money change people?i dnt know... Childhood memories are always nostalgically beautiful,a very sentimental poem sweet Car..hope you are fine..hugs!
Poet Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 6:59 PM
An emotional write here Carolyn.Enjoyed.How are you?
Culverhouse Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:40 PM
Sad that you have lost contact with your sis....call her! I bet she misses you too!!
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