Notes About The Poem

You don't get a second chance

In a world of haste and make believe
where time is a most valuable commodity,
do we really want to miss
chasing rainbows and cuddling kittens,
taking the scenic route and
smelling the roses along our way?

Sometimes a detour is the best shortcut.



AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Seeker Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Well said, take the slow boat, vibrant in solitude
Gauthier Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Thanks for the visit and comment ~
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 3:59 PM
Sometimes a detour is the best shortcut! Very nice!
Gauthier Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Thanks, Kim ~
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