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You Don'T Always Die From Tobacco

You don't always die from tobacco. Sometimes they'll remove part of your lung. You don't always die from tobacco. Sometimes they'll cut out your tongue, and you won't speak worth a heck with that big hole in your neck. No you don't always die from tobacco. You don't always die from tobacco. Sometimes you'll just keep coughing till you choke. You don't always die from tobacco. Sometimes you'll just have a stroke, and you can still do many things despite your amputated limbs. No you don't always die from tobacco. You don't always die from tobacco. Sometimes you'll always feel like you're always out of breath. You don't always die from tobacco. Sometimes you'll just be wishing for your death. Sometimes you'll live in constant pain as your quality of life goes down the drain becsuse you don't always die from tobacco. - Inspired from The Tobacco Song on YouTube. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RQE043K0bTM

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Date: 2/18/2012 10:24:00 AM
I see that you have a featured poem today Billy,, good to hear from you...)
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Date: 2/17/2012 12:48:00 PM
Dude, That needs pictorial captions and put as an advertisement on TV for all those who love to smoke!! Monica Pride
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Date: 2/15/2012 3:19:00 PM
Hilarious! I loved it! Congrats on your featured writing. Milt
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Date: 2/14/2012 12:47:00 PM
Hi, SillyBilly. These days, if you smoke, you probably die from starvation or malnutrition. Them smokes be too damn expensive! Good write. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 2/13/2012 7:13:00 AM
Nice message and delivered well, good job. Congratulations on being featured by Poetry Soup this week...............S.Ronthorpe.
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Date: 2/13/2012 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Billy. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2012 8:01:00 PM
congrats Wild Bill on featured poem this week on PS luv.. great creative piece ..
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:54:00 AM
haha this poem wants me to quit ive been trying to never works ill give it another try wish me luck love this write by the way
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Date: 11/24/2009 4:25:00 PM
One more thing. I just read this to my wife and she wanted me to thank you for her. "it gives her food for thought". She still smokes. : ) -Robert
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Date: 11/24/2009 4:22:00 PM
Ha ha I love this one ! very well written. I did not see the you tube thing, but I like this. Sometimes truth can be funny in a saracastic way as well as tragic. This is funny to me because I finally Quit and keep hearing about people not dying from tobacco from my friends who still smoke. Right on William
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