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You do wear a crown

Maybe it's in the elegance of your hair falling like a gown? Or the majesty of you; invisible, but you do wear a crown A smile like no other, in defiance of every frown Is it just me, or does happiness follow you around? To just hear the beauty of your voice renown The pools of light within your eyes, I certainly could drown They are ethereal; not often, though, do stars fall down So worthy is your acquaintance; it brought me to this town

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/27/2024 6:17:00 PM

Lovely writing, "not often, though, do stars fall down" don't forget you're one of those stars.... :) beautiful

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/27/2024 9:09:00 PM

Maybe so but I fell in the remotest part of earth. A place where only time sees ones worth. Hugs for the lovely comment though, it gives my hope rebirth.... A.S.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/26/2024 6:54:00 PM

Dear AS, your poem is romantic and beautiful. So full of appreciation and adoration for one you hold near and dear. Wonderful imagery like "A smile like no other, in defiance of every frown" paint a lovely portrait of the one who wears a crown. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/26/2024 7:32:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! My writing is often based on spontaneously muses this happened to be one of them. Love is something so simple to give. For me, it just comes natural to share it in the moment. I appreciate your words deeply! Regards A.S.