You Did This To Me

I looked at her and she looked fine
Until she turned to the side.
Something strange about that girl
She was shorter than she was wide.

She held her hands below her waist
And pulled up once in a while.
Then she rubbed it down again
Giving her face a little smile.

"Do you feel that?",  she would say
As she put my hand on her tummy.
The movement kind of startled me
So I didn't feel very "chummy".

"He's kicking again, and it's all your fault
YOU DID THIS TO ME!"
Then I would remind her of that night
When she wanted to be free.

"It takes two to tango." , I said to her
"You didn't seem to mind it then."
"But I never expected this consequence
When we acted as lovers not friends".

It's been almost nine months now
What is there to say?
We're not having a kitty or puppy
But a baby is on the way.

I'm sure we'll love the bundle of joy
That has been ordained for us.
With priceless smiles and goo goo talk
And grandparents who'll coo and fuss.

For a child always comes by way of love
Not only through passion's route.
But when he's born our lives will change
Of that, I have no doubt.

"So Lord, give us the grace
To raise our child with encouragement and love,
That he will grow in strength and wisdom
That can only come from above."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/4/2010 12:13:00 PM
lol.goo goo talk. you're funny. and thats really cute! she wanted to be free!there should be no ergret. very sweet Daniel. -always&forever Lynette
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Date: 5/12/2010 10:44:00 AM
I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today Daniel. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2010 8:40:00 PM
Nice poem...and good luck my friend. Sleep is highly over rated...lol...:-) You will find out what I mean. Good poem.
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:29:00 PM
A wonderful poem Daniel and a good attitude evolves from your lines too.. especially that luv and care that parenting brings... very nice rhyme too..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:11:00 PM
I liked this poem my friend... Greta work and keep it up...:JP]
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:42:00 PM
Time to be a man and step up to the plate, best wishes and good luck. Excellent write
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:30:00 PM
A nice pen picture
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:12:00 PM
awh what a sweet write , you did that to her alright you gave her that bundle of joy, congrats if this is true lol, nice one, and enjoyed this write
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