You Did Not Show Up

You did not show up 
And the night grows up and extends! 
 
In the extent of my call 
There is a dumbness forests, 
A Crimson sea like 
the crimson dawn in the homeland 
A psalms light from all directions, 
Tramples our white balconies 
while the night grows up and extend! 
 
And you didn't show up 
Mint, thyme and ripples spikes, 
Spread all over around;
they're your smell.
 
Where the daytime narrows 
and dreams bloom freely, freely
throughout the night
where night grow up and extend 
Everything complicity, in thy presence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 27, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Good day Fatima, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
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October 27, 2013 at 1:59 PM
My dear friend Linda thank you so much <3
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October 27, 2013 at 1:12 AM
Hello Fatima, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT <3
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October 27, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Thank you dear Skat Love <3
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September 22, 2013 at 7:20 PM
Hi Fatima! Welcome to poetrysoup. Your first poem has touched me. Keep it up. You will find your membership rewarding. You have great potentials. -Mohammad
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September 23, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Thank you Mohammad Yamin for comment and interest,hope we can be a friend !
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September 18, 2013 at 1:44 PM
Hi Fatima, with a pretty name , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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September 23, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Hi Skat it's really nice to meet such a wonderful people and poetry like you !
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September 18, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Fatima ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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September 23, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Hi Anne Lise it was nice to meet such a wonderful poetry like you, and sure I will visit other's page !
A   Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:30 PM
Fatima, enjoyed the entertaining ending..-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 17, 2013 at 5:50 PM
Hi Linda ..happy to see u around and sure it will be very nice to have me in your group.
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