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You Did Not Show Up

You did not show up And the night grows up and extends! In the extent of my call There is a dumbness forests, A Crimson sea like the crimson dawn in the homeland A psalms light from all directions, Tramples our white balconies while the night grows up and extend! And you didn't show up Mint, thyme and ripples spikes, Spread all over around; they're your smell. Where the daytime narrows and dreams bloom freely, freely throughout the night where night grow up and extend Everything complicity, in thy presence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/27/2013 10:47:00 AM
Good day Fatima, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/27/2013 1:59:00 PM
My dear friend Linda thank you so much <3
Date: 10/27/2013 1:12:00 AM
Hello Fatima, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT <3
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/27/2013 1:58:00 PM
Thank you dear Skat Love <3
Date: 9/22/2013 7:20:00 PM
Hi Fatima! Welcome to poetrysoup. Your first poem has touched me. Keep it up. You will find your membership rewarding. You have great potentials. -Mohammad
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/23/2013 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Mohammad Yamin for comment and interest,hope we can be a friend !
Date: 9/18/2013 1:44:00 PM
Hi Fatima, with a pretty name , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/23/2013 6:02:00 PM
Hi Skat it's really nice to meet such a wonderful people and poetry like you !
Date: 9/18/2013 8:59:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Fatima ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/23/2013 6:05:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise it was nice to meet such a wonderful poetry like you, and sure I will visit other's page !
Date: 9/17/2013 5:30:00 PM
Fatima, enjoyed the entertaining ending..-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/17/2013 5:50:00 PM
Hi Linda ..happy to see u around and sure it will be very nice to have me in your group.

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