You Create a World All Alone

So many days have gone by 
I wish I had wings to fly
I would of never done wrong
If I knew I would be here for so long
My life is within these four walls
Oh how my life has taken such a fall
It still shocks me to think I'm still here
I still have to wipe away my tears
One by one I count the long days
Higher it gets the days I've been away
I never seem to know
The day I will get to go
So I created a world of my own
With so many people I've never known
So many come and go
Its sad to see them go
Some say they'll keep in touch
But it doesn't mean that much
Cause many who leave this place
Run far from here like its a race
When they're finally out they start to forget
The ones in green so many of them they met
No matter how many friends in here you make
Whether they are true to you or fake
Always keep in mind
This one little line
You come alone 
You leave alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/1/2012 10:45:00 PM
Ahh this is amazing
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 10/2/2012 11:52:00 AM
thank you
Date: 10/1/2012 9:58:00 PM
Very touching and powerful welcome to the soup
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 10/2/2012 11:52:00 AM
thank you
Date: 10/1/2012 8:17:00 AM
Really touching...... I come alone, I will go alone..... I cheerish that two lines, reality, thanks for sharing
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 10/2/2012 11:54:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 10/1/2012 8:16:00 AM
Really touching...... I come alone, I will go alone..... I cheerish that two lines, reality, thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/9/2012 1:09:00 PM
Every day every minute cherish. Play at the edge but keep your feet planted firm. My 2 cents. Michael
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM
That was very good advice
Date: 9/6/2012 9:54:00 AM
Wow I like but we are never alone just seems like it some times
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM
Very true. Thank You
Date: 8/24/2012 2:36:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Julee - You write very good, like this poem. - Hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry.- Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM
Thank You
Date: 8/23/2012 3:25:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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Julee Gnanaratnam
Date: 8/23/2012 10:11:00 PM
Thank You
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