You Could Be Colorless

Do you remember the morning
you woke up and realized
the world was a piece of art?

Did it feel like standing at the edge of the ocean
for the first time
and being unable to understand
comprehend
the life just below what you could see?

And do you wonder 
if it was as beautiful as those white walls
in hospital rooms you saw
the first time you opened your eyes?

Because it was like seeing clearly
for the first time 

And did it make you think
that sunsets were paintings 
and the artist just had more ideas
than one canvas could hold?

And do you realize
for a second
that each person you see is an idea
that someone couldn't contain?

I can't tell you how this all came to be
and you can't tell me I'm wrong

But have you ever stopped to think
that of all the things we are and aren't
we could be colorless?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Oimbo Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 10:27 PM
it is a moving piece of poetry
Magofna Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 5:43 PM
this piece of art is quite lovely... i like it.
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