Notes About The Poem

 

You Cosmic Poetic Butterfly

 

When your mind—

The c   o   c   o   o   n

Of your spirit—

Re

      lea

               ses,

With your essence

Of healing words,

                            Let the rhythmic 

                           Wings of your being,

                          Soar you—

Streamlining 

                      Airways 

                                    Of life—

Of graceful

Liberation,

                           To those cosmic beings 

                           In the universe of life:

 

 Awaiting its

 Hydrating

Oxidation

                                       Of the

                Onederful 

                Onement 

                                     Of the

               Oneness 

                                   Of your

                Ondering 

                                Peace          

                                           And

                                                   Love.





 

YOU COSMIC POETIC BUTTERFLY

You Cosmic Poetic Butterfly

When your mind—
The c   o   c   o   o   n
Of your spirit—
Re
      lea
               ses,
With your essence
Of healing words,
                             Let the rhythmic 
                             Wings of your being,
                             Soar you—
Streamlining 
                      Airways 
                                    Of life—
Of graceful
Liberation,
                           To those cosmic beings 
                           In the universe of life:

 Awaiting its
 Hydrating
Oxidation
                                       Of the
                Onederful 
                Onement 
                                    Of the
                Oneness 
                                  Of your
                Ondering 
                                Peace          
                                           And
                                                   Love.
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Smith  Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 8:16 PM
A beautifully uplifting free-verse poem, its spacious, wing-like layout enacts the butterfly’s release and ascent. The cocoon-to-cosmos extended metaphor carries a powerful message of healing, liberation, and spiritual oneness, while the inventive “One-” wordplay gives the ending a lovely sense of unity and peace.🦋
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August 31, 2026 at 10:42 AM
Thanks, Alison. It takes a Cosmic Butterfly like yourself, to grasp the full oneness of this soaring poetic flight that took over half of an hour of flight. Your continuous, encouraging support, is most appreciated. In the oneness of poetic onement, peace and Love.
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