You Can'T See Me Eternaly Suffer

Thou shall pay, for what
thou has said and done to me
for I suffer
what you can't see is hidden
but, soon you will realize and change.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Quintero Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 5:08 AM
This drama is ineresting..I can't wait to read the next entry between you and Alec......poetry wars?
Saucillo Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 1:19 PM
very good! thanks for your comments on my work. inspiring.
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Nicely done Tanka. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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