You Can See Too Far

High in the Himalayas a dreamt of - our Shangri- La
Exquisite yearning desires become emotional realities 

Ignore it or give yourself up to it like a Holy Man

The wind never stops blowing and the air is so clear
I think you can see too far
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beesley Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:22 AM
i know that knowledge is power but those who can't control it get train wrecked too much knowing in overdrive
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Reads like a beautiful place..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Wow, I love the vision you have created, Nigel. I'd like to think I would be able to "give myself up to it" as God intended us to enjoy such beauty. Love, Carolyn
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